His hands then rubbed and fondled her legs, making an upward trek past her concave abdomen to those tits that still bore the imprints of his teeth.

""Yes!" Kagome hollered as he gripped those pert breasts, kneading the flesh and tweaking her puckered nipples as she thrashed against his face, her hands fisting her own hair."
Best imagery ever.

So hot. 'scuse me while I go get a cold glass of water.

Da Grrrl Says: LOLOL! The \"\'scuse me\" just cracked me up! <33

Oh my gosh. I'm so glad to see an update for this story. I may just have to go back and reread everything. I've missed this story.

DaGrrrl says: Yeah, you'll need to do that. It's been a year.

LMAO. Thirty minutes later.... Hahaha.

So going back and reading everything that I've had on my reading list and this one was one that I was excited to read since I love me some baseball. Once again you've done a great job at explaining things without putting everything into an instruction manual. I sincerely hope that you dust this fic off sometime soon so we can see some more insightful Souta and cranky Kags.

PS, I love the dynamics of Inu's "second family".

I'm sure I've reviewed this before; if not I'm making amends now because this is a piece of fiction I would love to see turned into more. I can imagine you doing a lovely job with Miroku's angst about his unrequited feelings, but still manage his "I just need that smile" outlook. I could see it going really horribly for him if it wasn't returned in the end, I can see InuYasha being cool about it and remaining friends, and I can see it turning out all sunshine and rainbows.

Maybe I'll have to finish it in my head in multiple ways, but I loved what you've given us in this Drabble. Thanks ever so much,
-S

DaGrrrl says: What a great review, thank you! I wrote that for an old LJ comm I used to belong to based on the prompt "13". How it turned into THAT, I just don't know! But I wouldn't count out a sequel, even after such a long time, because I'm a fan of drabbles when I'm in the mood. Admittedly, I never thought about turning this one into a full on fiction, but if I get another compatible prompt list -or the hankering for a oneshot- I just may surprise you. :)

I'm so glad you gave it a shot again after a long while. I haven't been on the up and up with your blog, but I do wish you the best and hope everything is going smoothly for you.

I haven't read an InuYasha story since the last time you updated. I'm glad to see that you still capture my attention with the way you handle them and the way you write. I would buy you a drink if I were in NY. Thanks again for updating. :)
s.

Author's Response: I haven't been up on my blog, either, so it's all good, lol. I've updated maybe 5 times in 8 months. I haven't been around at all, but I couldn't let my 10th year pass without giving it a try. It was short (since I have things I need to research for the next chapter), but it was meant to push the story along a bit since it will be ending soon.

Thanks for your continued support of my crack stories, lol. I'm hoping to get a few more updates out in the next 2 weeks; I owe you guys that much!