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Vision of Love by InuGrrrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 119]

Summary:
What if, by chance, you happened to meet someone that you think could be perfect for you... and then you found out that perfect was far from what they were? Could you look past your own insecurities, or would you allow your fear to scare away what could possibly be the best thing in your life?
Categories: Blood & Roses
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, AU, Drama, Hentai, Oneshot, Romance, Songfic, WAFF
Warnings: Explicit Sexual Content, Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9791 Read Count: 1793

[Report This] Published: June 14, 2006 Updated: June 14, 2006
Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: April 28, 2013
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Vision of Love

I was reading this thread on reddit about a mommy with a blind child and I started feeling depressed, wondering what if it were me or what if I was blind etc. I needed a serious pick me up. This story is perfect because even though its absolutely heart-wrenching and tear inducing when she rejects him (I'm overly emotional after reading the other article), it has a nice and sweet ending.

Da Grrrl Says: I totally understand. Losing one\'s sight must be wretched, and as someone who is very myopic, I worry about my eyes a lot. I wrote this so long ago, but it was my testament to the power of love and how it can, and should, overcome even the hardest challenges. Kagome was a fool at first, but she had to learn about what was most important on her own. She did, and in the end, she benefited greatly by finding a wonderful man to share her life with. We can only hope that everyone else gets such a great happy ending. :)



Let Go by InuGrrrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]

Summary:
A blind date helps two people come out of their shells. Sess/Rin.
Categories: Love, IG
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Rin, Sesshomaru
Genres: AU, Hentai, Romance, Slice of Life, WAFF
Warnings: Explicit Sexual Content, Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8637 Read Count: 660

[Report This] Published: June 15, 2006 Updated: June 15, 2006
Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: April 28, 2013
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Let Go

It's sad to say that I never read this story before, now that I have, I can say that I'm a melted pile of goo. You can also see the development of your writing skills as well, which is great.

Da Grrrl Says: Oh yeah.... This is sooooo old. LOL. I\'ve changed a lot from these days. All my old stories are like this (Hell, worse than this >.>), but I don\'t rewrite them for that very reason -I want people to see that I\'ve grown as a writer and developed better skills. :)




Summary:
[Complete] If InuYasha Taisho plans to get a passing grade at Takahashi high, he needs to ace his career day project and learn to run a business. But when the 16 year old meets his sexy new boss, he learns the finer points of growing up.
Categories: Pulp-Fiction
Characters: Bankotsu, InuYasha, Izayoi, Kagome, Kagura, Kanna, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Original Character, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Souten, Toga/Touga
Genres: Angst, AU, Comedy, Drama, Family, Harem, Hentai, Romance, School Life, Slice of Life, Tragedy, WAFF
Warnings: Aggressive Sex, Character Death, Drug Use, Explicit Sexual Content, Incest, Language, Masturbation/Solo, Underage Sexual Relationships, Violence
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248777 Read Count: 69137

[Report This] Published: June 20, 2006 Updated: December 31, 2013
Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: January 15, 2014
Chapter number: 53
Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue II: Forever With You. Pt. 3

Happy new year grrrl! I'm going to reread this story because it's just so good! Thanks for posting this chapter. And I hope your holidays were great! :)

DaGrrrl says: Thanks, Ilona! ^^ I appreciate it, and my holidays were pretty good. Hopes yours were, too! <33



Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: January 15, 2014
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Funny Meeting You Here

Ahh to be a teenager in high school again. How I loathe and miss those days! My holidays were ok. Got heart broken on Xmas day which made your 'once upon a Christmas memory' story such an uplifting treat for me to read. But I decided to get a new start with the new year and erase that asshole from my mind haha. I'm on a reading binge here. 3 chapters in and I won't stop until I finish it!

DaGrrrl says: Sorry to hear that you were with a flake, but 2014 is a new year to meet someone awesome and I'm glad my oneshot cheered you up a bit. ^___^ It's surprising how many people told me that little story made them smile. It's a sad reminder that the holidays often suck for most of us. =/



Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: January 16, 2014
Chapter number: 53
Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue II: Forever With You. Pt. 3

Finally finished rereading it! Just a questions, what happened to the note naraku put in inuyashas locker? And what happened to naraku? Also, how on earth do you keep up with all your stories? You have so many different plots going on!




Summary:

Her broken past led her to seek comfort in the worst ways, and he just happened to be in the wrong place at the right time. When the most powerful woman in Japan has finally met her match, will love rule all, or will it be crushed by rivalry, deceit, and an inescapable past?
Categories: Love, IG

Characters: Ayame, Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kouga, Miroku, Original Character, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Toga/Touga
Genres: Angst, AU, Dark, Drama, Hentai, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Tragedy, WAFF
Warnings: Character Death, Controversial Subject Matter, Domestic Violence, Explicit Sexual Content, Graphic Violence, Language, Mild Sexual Situations, Violence
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86034 Read Count: 33488

[Report This] Published: February 13, 2007 Updated: April 10, 2014
Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: March 03, 2013
Chapter number: 18
Title: Chapter 18: Hang From Your Own Rope

Rin is so bad, but seriously sess, you could be in a drag race and win it if you wanted to! I hope he apologizes to her. Thanks for updating so frequently inugrrrl. It's always a pleasure to read your writing!



In His Eyes by InuGrrrl Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 726]

Summary:
He grew up alone in a world that doesn't understand him and she just lost the only one she ever had. But when fate steps in, will Kagome find everything she needs in InuYasha's eyes?
Categories: Challenges
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60950 Read Count: 12815

[Report This] Published: June 23, 2007 Updated: June 16, 2013
Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: June 16, 2013
Chapter number: 13
Title: Chapter 13: The Winds of Change

Awesome. Thanks for the update!
I'm current.y reading this fic over again a because even though it rings a bell, I'm not too sure what the entire story was about!
Chapter 13. Gotta love when sesshomarou finds a way to come in the plot!

Chapter 12. Horse? Carriage? What year is this roundabout? When I read chapter 13 I thought it might've been the feudal era up until the end when (boom!) a call was placed. 19th century to early 20th perhaps? I shall continue reading.

Chapter 11. Starting to see where koga came from. Inuyasha beast mode engage! Must get to the bottom of why he talks like that! Sesshomarou is around, yet inuyasha was left to fend for himself with his pet wolf in the forest after his mother died?

Chapter 10. The man involved with the hunters? I wonder if he is referring to them because they are just wolves or due to another reason. I hate matchmakers. Hate them. Starting to connect the dots backwards here haha.

I'm going to have to come back tomorrow and read the rest. I'm so tired after work that I'm reading things wrong. The last straw was when I read "how are you faring?" As " how are you farting?". Yup, that's my que to go to sleep and rest hahaha.

Anyways, it's been a pleasure as always to read your writings grrrl

DaGrrrl says: Ah, lets see if I can shed a little bit of light for ya.

1. I like Sesshomaru -when I write him- so that's why I decided he's due for an appearance.

2. I deliberately didn't give a time frame (I do that so I'm not confined to a specific period and way of doing things), but you're on the right track.

3. Why who talks like what? InuYasha? For the full explanation, you'll need to start at the beginning. :) Also, Sesshomaru hasn't appeared in this story yet, so we don't know his background at all. But if you look at the canon, where he really was around, his presence made no difference because InuYasha still grew up in a forest alone. lol.

4. The man involved with the hunters is Kouga (You really gotta read this in the correct order >.>)

LOL @ "how are you farting?" Yeah, it's definitely time for sleep -and thanks for the review! ^^




Summary:


Lovely wallpaper by Moniquiu

"Kagome, I just want to be your friend." That's what he said, but after years of pain and disappointment, could the love of one determined boy mend her shattered heart? How she wanted to believe...
Categories: Love, IG

Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58402 Read Count: 6723

[Report This] Published: February 15, 2008 Updated: February 13, 2014
Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: August 29, 2013
Chapter number: 9
Title: Chapter 9: Under the Milky Way

Hey grrrl, I loved these two chapters! Can you believe I'm developing carpal tunnel syndrome?! It sucks so bad because the pain can come at the worst times and its immensely painful.

As for the chapter, Izayoi is a bitch. Sesshomarou is himself, toga I kinda feel sorry for haha. Inuyasha and kAgome all the way though! I want to see jinenji sometime soon. I know things aren't looking great for inuyasha and all the plotting his mother is doing, but I hope I get to find out soon. Thanks for updating!!!

DaGrrrl says: Oh no.... -another CTS victim. =/

Take some free advice: Buy hand braces for time when you're going to use the computer a lot/write a lot. There are the ones that you strap on that have hard support for the wrist and such, but there are also cheap ones. They're completely soft, fingerless, and they have a tight, spandex-type fit. I used those a lot for light support -and they're cheap. About a buck or two if you live near a dollar store. The other braces are usually under $20. Also, motrin and bengay help because as the CT gets worse, the pain will move up your forearms. It sucks, but as long as you protect yourself and try to take it easy, it won't get too bad -I hope.

As for the chapter, Jinenji will appear soon enough. He's a big part of the story, but he's not in a lot of scenes because he never leaves his farm very much and IK have college and home lives, so while he is the 3rd most important character, don't expect him in a ton of scenes. Plus, this story is a novella, so it will be ending soon enough. It was never meant to be too long, so I'm hoping to wrap it up soon. ^^




Summary:

They were fated from the very start, but their worlds were too far apart for it to matter. Now he will try to fit a lifetime of love into one last winter.
Categories: Novellas, Love, IG

Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38112 Read Count: 5486

[Report This] Published: April 25, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2013
Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: April 19, 2012
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Nefarious.

this, was the worst cliffhanger i've ever read!! Sesshomarou is one of my favourite characters in this story (and in general!!) and you leaving us with this ending and the possibility of no updates any time soon is making me bite my nails!

And you know what the crazy thing is?

A few days earlier i was watching this tv show "Strange addictions" or something similar and the lady on that episode was addicted to eating her dead husband's ashes!!! I know this isnt happening here but the image of her licking the ashes came to my mind after reading the end!

Da Grrrl Says: Dude... I totally know what show that is. They have some of the most disgusting and weird addictions I\'ve ever seen. Like the chick who kept eating cat food, the one who kept eating powder, and the one who was in an intimate relationship with his car. And the car was male as well. >.> People with flippin\' ISSUES.

And yes, evil cliffy time! This story has about 2 chapters left and I seriously want to work on the next one right away. So the wait for the skinny may not take that long. *crosses fingers*

Thanks for the comment luv! ^^



Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: January 22, 2013
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Ineluctable.

Love love love it!! I just really hope that sesshomarou is still alive. I mean, what do doctors really know, eh? And inuyasha and yoga start to mend fences or.......? We shall see! Thanks for updating grrrl, I love you lol.



The Neighbor by InuGrrrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 681]

Summary:
Everyone has a limit, a ceiling, a breaking point... and he will find hers.
Categories: Pulp-Fiction, Novellas, Darkfic, Love, IG
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61951 Read Count: 19962

[Report This] Published: March 06, 2010 Updated: June 16, 2015
Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: June 20, 2015
Chapter number: 14
Title: Chapter 14: Pleasure, Little Treasure

Happy 10 years!!! I have to say, I thought you'd forgotten this story. It's been such a long time. I hope you are well! I'm so happy you updated, even though I have significantly reduced my time reading fanfiction online, your stories are always great to read.



Pas De Deux by InuGrrrl Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 355]

Summary:
[Complete] Three days would pass before he'd figure out why he got the room... and damn him for continuing to let her believe it.
Categories: Novellas, Love, IG
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43080 Read Count: 5582

[Report This] Published: December 17, 2010 Updated: June 16, 2012
Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: June 17, 2012
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: CODA

Thank you so much for finishing the story. It's such a special story for you and i thank you for putting it online for us to read. i absolutely loved this story from beginning to the end. :)




Summary:
When serious and conservative Sesshomaru receives a special promotion at work, his free-spirited kid brother decides to help him celebrate in style. Tonight, some secrets will be revealed, others will be explored, and one will be kept forever.
Categories: Love, IG
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Rin, Sesshomaru
Genres: AU, Family, Hentai, Humor, Oneshot, Slice of Life, WAFF, Yaoi
Warnings: Explicit Sexual Content, Gay Sex, Inu-cest, Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11942 Read Count: 868

[Report This] Published: July 05, 2011 Updated: July 05, 2011
Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: April 28, 2013
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Can You Keep A Secret?

I'm going back and rereading some of my favorite stories of yours and this one is H O T!! But, at the same time is so sweet and heartwarming. Their brotherhood is great and you really surprised me at the end of it, although its a good surprise. It's one of my staple stories that I reread often:)

Da Grrrl Says: Awww, thank you very much! It always makes me happy when someone deems my stories good enough for a re-read. :)



If I Want To by InuGrrrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 417]

Summary:
"Let me make this clear so there's no misunderstanding." He lifted her chin with a single finger. "I get what I want, Kagome, and I'm not afraid to get my hands dirty."
Categories: Novellas, Love, IG
Characters: Ayame, Bankotsu, Guest Character, Hakudoushi, Hojo, InuYasha, Izayoi, Jakotsu, Kaede, Kagome, Kagura, Kanna, Kikyou, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Mrs. Higurashi, Myouga/Myoga, Naraku, Original Character, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou, Souta, Souten, Toga/Touga, Tsubaki
Genres: Angst, AU, Crossover, Drama, Friendship, Hentai, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, School Life, Shoujo, Slice of Life, Tragedy, WAFF, Yaoi
Warnings: Abuse, Aggressive Sex, Bisexuality, Explicit Sexual Content, Implied Rape, Language, Punishment, Underage Sexual Relationships, Violence
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23350 Read Count: 4950

[Report This] Published: July 17, 2011 Updated: June 16, 2014
Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: March 03, 2013
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Parallels

Happy birthday inugrrrl !!!! Gotta be honest here, I had to retread the last few chapters to jog my memory on this story. And geez, guys are assholes and hahaha I think it's cute how inuyasha is a mammas boy.

Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! ^_^ And yup, it\'s true. Most people will probably need to re-read prior chapters because it\'s been such a long time. I didn\'t even realize it was this long since the last update. >__< But I\'m working on getting things up to speed. :D



Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: June 17, 2014
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Camouflage

Happy 9nth birthday Inugrrrl!!!! I'm so glad you are still writing fanfics. I think i might've been reading Harry potter fanfics around this time, which helped me discover the fanfiction world and Inuyasha fanfics! Seems so far away now but it brings some sweet memories back. Jakotsu is adorable here, i feel sorry for him because he will have to be very patient with Bankotsu. And wow, Inuyasha can seem like having multiple personalities, what with how he behaves around his parents are in school. I hated this type of person back in highschool. BUT, since it's Inu, i still love him and wish for him to get together with Kagome. Light Yagami is a creep and I do love how you portray him here. Thanks for updating this story, i love it. How are you grrrl? I hope you are well in all aspects of your life.

Until next time, ttyl!




Summary:
[Oneshot] Feeling homesick in the Sengoku Jidai, Kagome shares her Christmas memories with her new husband, but does InuYasha even get it?
Categories: Blood & Roses, Love, IG
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Canon, Romance, WAFF
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2456 Read Count: 154

[Report This] Published: December 25, 2013 Updated: December 25, 2013
Reviewer: ilona   Signed   
Date: December 25, 2013
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon a Christmas Memory

I love this. I needed a nice romantic Christmas story today. I hope you are well and a Very Merry Christmas inugrrrl!!

DaGrrrl says: Thank you! I'm happy that you liked it and Merry Xmas! ^^