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Submission by InuGrrrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]

Summary:
InuYasha has grown tired of Kagome's games and sets out to show her how he's waited.
Categories: Blood & Roses
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Canon, Hentai, Oneshot, PWP, Songfic
Warnings: Explicit Sexual Content, Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1796 Read Count: 2446

[Report This] Published: June 15, 2006 Updated: June 15, 2006
Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   
Date: April 25, 2014
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Submission

Oh man I forgot how much I enjoyed your lemons (especially as a nice late night treat XD)! I love how Inuyasha's thoughts are on the violent and possessive side of things, but how there is tenderness and sweetness to them too. You do succinct, yet expressive really well, and I think the style in this chapter really fits the straightforward idea/plot behind it!

Author's Response: Thanks, Rocha! This story is older than dirt, but it's nice that someone can still enjoy it 9 years later. :D



Fatality by InuGrrrl Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 447]

Summary:

InuYasha, a hanyou ripped from his mother's arms and raised in the cruel and violent world of bloodsports, must learn who he is and where his true destiny lies.


Categories: Pulp-Fiction

Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127362 Read Count: 17520

[Report This] Published: June 20, 2006 Updated: September 04, 2006
Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   
Date: May 23, 2012
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: My Champion

Yay I love the way this chapter ended! I really like that Kagome and Inuyasha seem to accept and like each other already instead of them taking forever to give each other a chance. Ah!! I'm just super happy that Inuyasha accepted her rose!!! I read some of the reviews and apparently things don't stay happy (and it's not like things could just go jolly well for the next thirty chapters or something lol), but I will cherish this and let it be my light during the upcoming (apparently) sadder chapters!

Da Grrrl Says: LOL! Your reviews make me giggle! Thanks for that! <3 It\'s nice to see all that optimism! ^^



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   
Date: May 29, 2012
Chapter number: 26
Title: Chapter 26: Forsaken

NOOOOO!!! I've been reading this very slowly because I knew sad stuff was coming up, and when I got to this chapter, I could definitely feel my angsty senses tingling. :'( :'( WAHH I just want Kagome and Inuyasha and Kinto and Shiori and EVEYRONE IN THE WORLD TO BE HAPPY!! Is that too much to ask!? My tears aside, good chapter! Hopefully things get much better for everyone soon or I shall be sad forever!




Summary:
She came to spend the summer with her favorite cousin never expecting to meet the love of her life.
Categories: Love, IG
Characters: InuYasha, Izayoi, Kagome, Kikyou, Miroku, Sesshomaru
Genres: Angst, AU, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Slice of Life, Songfic, WAFF
Warnings: Language
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16350 Read Count: 7258

[Report This] Published: September 01, 2006 Updated: September 01, 2006
Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: August 16, 2013
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

:DDDDDD Haha I'm super duper excited that I started reading this!!!! I like how everything is set up, and Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is so funny! For some reason, I really like when they start off less than friendly haha. I can't wait to see how the whole Kikyo and Sesshoumaru thing plays out too!

DaGrrrl says: Thanks! :D This is one of my 'fluffy', kiddie stories, as I like to call them. I wrote it in one weekend, or something like that, and it was actually fun. ^^




Summary:
After tragedy strikes, three men fight to rise to power in the most revered city in the world. But once it's obtained, can they keep it?

Categories: Pulp-Fiction
Characters: Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Original Character, Renkotsu, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru
Genres: Angst, AU, Dark, Drama, Hentai, Tragedy, Urban
Warnings: Aggressive Sex, Character Death, Controversial Subject Matter, Drug Use, Explicit Sexual Content, Graphic Violence, Implied Rape, Language, Rape, Violence
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83620 Read Count: 12100

[Report This] Published: October 13, 2006 Updated: March 13, 2012
Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   
Date: July 11, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Love. Hate. Tragedy.

Oh my god. I don't even know what to do! I was trying so hard to hold myself together because I'd been preparing for all the feels but I can't!! Honestly I think you wrote Tanisha so well I wasn't even sure up until that point if I wanted Kagome to enter the equation at all and I'm one of those people who is 100% for InuKag (except for sexytimes, in which case the more the merrier!), so congrats on getting me so attached to a OC and then JUST RIPPING HER AWAY FROM ME LIKE THAT!!! *SOBS AND WAILS!*!! The sad ending aside, awesome(ly sad) first chapter. I'll work up the emotional strength to move onto the next chapter soon, but for now I shall just wallow in my misery.

Da Grrrl Says: Awwww, I am SO sorry! *hugs* If it helps, there hasn\'t been anymore ripping away... Well, >.> just a little, but it\'s a flashback. I promise! <.< Though, I can\'t promise that in future chapters...

I\'m not helping, am I? lol.



All's Fair... by InuGrrrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 89]

Summary:
Ever had an unrequited crush? Ever wanted someone so bad you could taste it in the very air? Ever felt like they would never give a damn so there was no point? Ever been... dead wrong?

A deliciously smutty birthday gift for my girl, C-note aka Bluezinthos.
Categories: Love, IG

Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango
Genres: AU, Comedy, Hentai, Oneshot, PWP, Slice of Life, Urban
Warnings: Aggressive Sex, Explicit Sexual Content, Language, Voyeurism
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7034 Read Count: 3359

[Report This] Published: December 17, 2006 Updated: December 17, 2006
Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: June 05, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: All's Fair...

Whoooo, that was one hooot lemon. I can definitely see why this is such a popular fic. Haha I hope this isn't an awkward compliment, but I seriously think you rock at sex dialogue. It's smutty and fantastically dirty, but some of these lines are just so witty and clever!

Also: All's fair in fucking and sucking. = my new favorite line! Haha now I just have to find a situation in real life when I can use it.

On a side note: I LOOOVE your K-pop playlist! Like nine of my current favorite K-pop songs are on here! I don't even need youtube anymore haha. I am in LOVE with BIG BANG!! My favorite songs are Fantastic Baby and Love Dust right now. I'm a car listener, and I ALWAYS start with Love Dust because it's just such a happy, cheery and dance-happy song! Ah! I love U-KISS and B.A.P. and DBSK and SNSD and just everything!! Your auditory taste is rocking!

Da Grrrl Says: Squee!! You\'re a k-pop fan! I just fell in love with Big bang myself, so I know why you love them. :P TaeYang =OMGGGGGGAWD. I adore him. He\'s so freakin\' cute and that body. @_@ But alas, I\'m a KissMe. U-KISS is my #1 and no one comes before them, that\'s why I have so much U-KISS in the playlist. I usually have an all U-KISS list going, but I\'ve been ODing on BB this week (I now have ALL of their albums and there are so many good songs!) and had to share. I should be adding some more shortly.

And I\'m glad you liked the oneshot. I try very hard not to mimic or borrow from anything I read out here because I want to be original and stay true to my own style, so I\'m always proud when someone enjoys my brand of porn. Though, all too often, I see my work reflected in the works of others, especially those who have read my stuff a lot in the past. It\'s super-annoying for me, which is why I have that warning for people about leeching my style in my ToS now. When I see my descriptions and scenes being blatantly used, I retreat just a little more into not updating. I don\'t like feeling like I write to give others material to copy when they should just bust their ass and learn the way I did. But this was written ages ago when I didn\'t have that issue, so that\'s probably why it still feels fun.




Summary:




The knife of romance, the embodiment of pain. How can a sin so vile produce a love so pure?
Categories: Novellas

Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 103818 Read Count: 27893

[Report This] Published: January 29, 2007 Updated: September 15, 2012
Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: August 16, 2013
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: Live Through the Loss

Wow, this story has completely drawn me in and I've been reading non-stop since I started! I love the angst between Inuyasha and Kagome, and I think Miroku, Sango and Kikyo (though she's only been in like one chapter!) are super well-written. I felt really bad for Inuyasha when he posed the hypothetical question to Miroku and Miroku basically said Inuyasha should be killed by firing squad :(. I have no idea if I'm in the majority or minority, but I actually don't feel any disgust or anything towards the idea, at least, of incest/Kagome and Inuyasha beings siblings. You capture their emotions and the thoughts between Inuyasha and Kagome really well, and embarrassing as it is to admit, I even get teary eyed during some of Inuyasha's inner monologues because I felt so bad for him and the fact that he has no one to talk to about this! Anyway, I really love this story and I can't wait to see how it plays out!

DaGrrrl says: Aww, thanks so much. :) This is one of 'babies' that I've neglected FAR too long. I haven't updated it in nearly a year, but it is definitely one of the ones I plan to finish. The emotional conflict in this one has just been addictive for me, but draining as well. I love this story and all of it's yummy angst! Glad to hear that you're enjoying it, and while I think most who are okay with incest are in the minority, I find that I'm not too bothered by the bro/sis relationship. I obviously wouldn't want that for any kids of mine, but I tried to give a realistic portrayal of what it 'could' be like for two teens in that impossible situation and how their choices affect everyone around them.



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: August 17, 2013
Chapter number: 16
Title: Chapter 16: The Heart of Everything

Oh my goooddd. I always feel bad when I read a story and I don't review for like a million chapters but seriously I can't stop reading! I love how you tied together this story and this chapter in particular. Did NOT see that one coming with Sesshoumaru and Rin, and I'm super excited/anxious to see how it affects Toga when he finds out about his kids. eek! And of course, the parts with Kagome and Inuyasha and Kagome are always sinfully great (and the sinful part really applies here lol!). Gahh, haha I have to drag on the next few chapters to delay the end!

DaGrrrl says: LOL. Well, it will be the end of what's posted, but not the end of the story, so there's that? XD So glad you're having fun with it, tho! KoR IS pretty fun to read (If the incest doesn't scare you off), so I love that you're digging it!



True Colors by InuGrrrl Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 198]

Summary:

Talent, it can only get one but so far. So when aspiring artist, InuYasha Taisho, meets a woman that can change his artistic future, and yet another that ends up cradling his heart, what will he choose?
Categories: Novellas, Love, IG

Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Miroku, Naraku, Rin, Sango
Genres: Angst, AU, Drama, Hentai, Romance, Slice of Life, WAFF
Warnings: Explicit Sexual Content, Language, Violence
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39735 Read Count: 6155

[Report This] Published: February 28, 2007 Updated: August 19, 2009
Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: May 24, 2012
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Beautiful Stranger

Gosh darn it! I have been neglecting pretty much everything else in my life the past few days because I've been reading your stories obsessively!! I just can't escape! Haha I really love how this chapter ended and the way Inuyasha asked Kagome out was uber cute! Ahh can't wait to read more!



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   
Date: May 24, 2012
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Charming Boyz n' Forever Girlz

Haha! This is so perfect! I really don't know what it is about your writing, but I swear I felt giddy right along with Inuyasha and Kagome! And poor Inuyasha just can't get that kiss! I was internally preparing myself for the kiss because you built it up for a whole paragraph, and when I read "loud bark," I was like..."Gah!! BAD!! BAD DOG!!" Lol Awesome chapter!

Da Grrrl Says: LOL! I put this story on hiatus with no intention of finishing it, but dang it, your enthusiasm has me totally reconsidering. Look what you did! xD



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: May 24, 2012
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Saturated

Yesss!!!! Their long-awaited kiss :D!! This is my favorite InuKag coupling ever! I love how they keep getting embarrassed over saying what's on their mind but everything they say ends up being so sweet!

Inuyasha and Miroku's exchanges are hilarious. I wish I were as witty as Miroku haha. Lol I just read your response to my last review, and all I have to say is "YESS!!! THE SEEDS HAVE BEEN PLANTED. IT WAS MY PLAN ALL ALONG!" Haha this story and Love Like Winter are probably my favorites so far!



For Mama by InuGrrrl Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]

Summary:
A little boy remembers one of his mother's most important lessons.
Categories: Love, IG, Flash Pulp
Characters: InuYasha
Genres: Ficlet
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 408 Read Count: 641

[Report This] Published: March 17, 2007 Updated: March 17, 2007
Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: August 16, 2013
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: For Mama

I love reading stories with Inuyasha and his mother, especially when it's set in the time frame when Inuyasha's still young and on his own. They're always so bittersweet, and I think you really captured that feeling well and in so few words. Great drabble :D!

DaGrrrl says: Shankies, babes! I wrote this for my surrogate mom (for her mom, actually), so it makes me happy when someone likes it. :D



In His Eyes by InuGrrrl Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 726]

Summary:
He grew up alone in a world that doesn't understand him and she just lost the only one she ever had. But when fate steps in, will Kagome find everything she needs in InuYasha's eyes?
Categories: Challenges
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60950 Read Count: 12815

[Report This] Published: June 23, 2007 Updated: June 16, 2013
Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: June 12, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times

!!!!! I was trying to think of a sound to convey my excitement, but couldn't so I put a bunch of exclamation marks instead!! I can already tell I'm going to love this story! I loved that Inuyasha (or who I assume is Inuyasha!) delivered wood and food to Kagome! He is already turning out to be such a sweet and nice Inuyasha and I am in love! And the scene where he realizes who she is was so perfect, with the flashbacks throughout and his envy that she's so carefree! :D I was super busy over the weekend so I am UBER excited to be able to get my Inuyasha fanfic fix again! Can't wait to read more╚(•y62;•)╝!

Da Grrrl Says: LOL! Your reviews are awesome and always make me giggle. Thanks for always taking the time to leave them. You rock!

I think you\'ll adore this InuYasha. It seems that everyone does, but I won\'t say why. I\'ll let you see for yourself why he\'s a fave. :D



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   
Date: June 12, 2012
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: With the Best Intentions...

YESSS!! Inuyasha is so ridiculously cute I am practically squeezing my cheeks in glee!! I don't even have words! He's just one of those characters that's so sweet without even trying, and I swear: I'm going to use my college education to create a machine that can bring him from this story to real life. You can count on that! Haha and after reading your response I am even more excited :D Got to pace myself or I'll go crazy when I run out of "Next" buttons to click!



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   
Date: June 12, 2012
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: InuYasha.

=D Their meeting was everything I wanted and more! I really like how kind-hearted they both are in this fic! I think Kagome's conviction to always help those in need, whether it's a bear cub or an injured Inuyasha, is my favorite thing about her. And I felt so bad for Inuyasha when he was thinking about her rejecting him T.T It makes me so sad to think about the fact he's had to live so many years alone, at least until his pet wolf came along, and I'm counting on Kagome to make him feel alllll better! Great chapter!!



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: June 12, 2012
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: What Words Cannot Say.

^.^ :D o/!!! Their first kiss!! I'm seriously partying hard in my chair right now I'm so happy (doesn't hurt that Love Dust is playing =D!!!). Haha I loved the first part of the chapter, where Inuyasha is trying out vanilla for the first time. So sweet! And the way he has trouble finding the right words to say but always says the right thing anyway is so cute. Gahh I am in love with Inuyasha and Kagome! I really like Maikeru and Aiko too. They are so nice and so far, they're the only ones from town who've bothered to help Kagome at all. They just both seem so kind-hearted. Anyway, I love this story!!



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   
Date: October 03, 2012
Chapter number: 11
Title: Chapter 11: Caged by Fragile Bars

Omg. I haven't had the time to read anything you've updated in sooo long that I was dyingg! I have an exam bright and early tomorrow morning but seeing that this was updated was pretty much the highlight of my day. I'm soo curious how the whole Doc Hiro meddling/Kouga story will play out and end up affecting Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship. I love how much attention you actually give to the "side" characters in your stories in general. Honestly, I kind of like Kouga (minus the whole hunter thing) in this story because he's really well-written and while I'm definitely not rooting for Kagome-Kouga, he becomes a better character in my eyes each time I read about it. And I feel really bad for Inuyasha T.T! It seems like nothing went his way this chapter, and I was so torn when Kagome told him to get out at the end :(. I really want them to be happy together forever (yay for naive, happy optimism!), but I totally understood why she was scared when Inuyasha transformed so quickly. I guess I'll just have to imagine a happy ending to this chapter haha or else my heart shall be terribly sore through my exam tomorrow. Anyway, lovely chapter as always and please update again soon!



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: January 11, 2013
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Hope is Found With Time.

Yayyy!!! I was so excited that you updated this story because this is probably one of my favorite stories ever! I've said this before, but I love how much attention is given to Kouga. I have no clue how his story line is gonna play out, but I like him more and more each chapter. I think you did a really good job conveying both Inu and Kagome's thoughts on what happened in the last chapter, and I'm glad that Kagome thought things over and hopefully she can fix her relationship with Inuyasha because I hate seeing him sad :'(.

As always, great chapter and thanks for updating :D



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: June 23, 2013
Chapter number: 13
Title: Chapter 13: The Winds of Change

YESS!!!!!!! You have no idea how excited I was to see that this story was updated!!! I'm so happy to see Kagome and Inuyasha resolve everything between them and Inuyasha is sooo freaking adorable, as usual! It's always so sad to read about how his childhood has affected the way he sees himself now, but I'm super happy that Kagome's giving him the love he deserves :D!!! I loved when he had to ask for help with the buttons lol.

The Lupines are super interesting! I thoroughly expected to dislike Logan Lupine just based on what we've read from other characters' perspectives about the guy, but -sigh- you give him too much backstory and actual personality for me to properly dislike him haha. I can still muster up some yuck for him because he's trying to destroy the forest, so I'll just hold onto that lol.

Btw, I love the newest site art! I didn't know how to comment on it separately, but it's probably my favorite one to date! Aside from the fact that it's straight up hot, it's probably one of my favorite Inuyasha drawings EVER. I keep scrolling up to see it again (and to re-read my favorite parts ^^!) because it's that awesome.

Anyway, you just made me super happy!!! Thanks for updating this story!!!

DaGrrrl says: Rochoa! ^^

Thanks for another lovely, well-written review. I totally appreciate it! I admit that I make InuYasha as adorable as I picture he'd be in that situation -full of innocence, wonder and all the new emotions that come from falling head over heels for someone. He's a fierce creature when he wishes to be -and Kagome has never met that side of him- but their bond grows with each thing they overcome, so i have faith in her that she'll remember how much she loves him when it really counts.

The Lupines are funny. Logan's back story makes him almost likeable, if not sympathetic. He's full of ignorance, arrogance, and pride and that can make for a bad mix. But we'll have to see what happens.

And thanks! This art is one of my all-time faves in my collection. She just KILLED it in every way. He's the InuYasha that best represents my site and the kind of fiction I write. I totally love it! <333

Thanks for the great review!




Summary:


Lovely wallpaper by Moniquiu

"Kagome, I just want to be your friend." That's what he said, but after years of pain and disappointment, could the love of one determined boy mend her shattered heart? How she wanted to believe...
Categories: Love, IG

Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58402 Read Count: 6723

[Report This] Published: February 15, 2008 Updated: February 13, 2014
Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   
Date: May 20, 2012
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: You're Crashing Into Me

Inuyasha and Jinenji have the sweetest friendship ever. I love how dedicated Inuyasha is to Jinenji. He's just such a good person in this story, I'm in love with him. And I'm soo suspicious about what Inuyasha's mother is up to. She seems up to no good, darn her! Anyway, I love this story and how Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is getting along :D.



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: February 22, 2013
Chapter number: 7
Title: Chapter 7: Decoding You Slowly.

Haha omg I love that last little bit!! XD! And the way Inuyasha handled Ayame was so awesome! I was scared that something crazy was going to happen or that Kagome was going to leave him and be pissed at him but I love how everything went down.

I think your depiction of Toga is really nice too. All your characters are so much more complex than they first seem, which I always love. And of course, now I'm anxious about what Izayoi is up to haha. Ahhh so much to look forward to in the coming chapters ^^!

Thanks so much for updating this story!! I love it even more each time I read it!

Da Grrrl Says: Thanks, Rochoa ^^

I should have updated this sooner, but I can\'t when I\'m not \'feeling\' it, ya know? This time I was and I\'m pretty happy with how this chapter turned out. I\'m starting to like this one a bit more, which wasn\'t the case in the beginning. It\'s still going to be a short story, but hopefully, you guys will enjoy the ride. :D



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: August 28, 2013
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: The Noise Inside My Head

OMG I AM FROTHING AT THE MOUTH BECAUSE I'M SO EXCITED AND ANGRY AND HAPPY AND ANGRY AGAIN!!!! I really want to dislike Inuyasha's parents (and to a degree, I do), but I actually somewhat understand where they're both coming from (which, of course, makes me feel like a bad person haha!). Izayoi's so many things that I dislike in a person, but you write her POV so well, I feel like I would want to do what she's doing too! She (seems at least) like she's been in the lap of luxury her whole life and based on her little schemes in this chapter, she doesn't appear to have much empathy at all for Jinenji and his mom...despite knowing that they mean so much to Inuyasha (or probably /because/ she knows what they mean to him and she deems them "lower class" people). Gahhh, haha I'm such a conflicted good/bad person! And of course, I LOVED the scenes with Inuyasha and Kagome. They're so sweet and despite Kagome trying to hold back, it's obvious that they're both care about each other! I'm super curious what'll happen to them from this point on after that little episode in the park! Thanks for the update :D!! I loved this!




Summary:

They were fated from the very start, but their worlds were too far apart for it to matter. Now he will try to fit a lifetime of love into one last winter.
Categories: Novellas, Love, IG

Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38112 Read Count: 5486

[Report This] Published: April 25, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2013
Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   
Date: May 20, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Destined.

I don't think I've read another Inuyasha as cute as this one. He is just the most adorable kid in the whole Inuyasha fandom!!!! It was I-can't-handle-this cute how he wants to protect his new friend and he insists that she's a girl! I would really like to order one toddler Inuyasha for my family haha

Da Grrrl Says: Awww! I\'m always amazed by how many people enjoy this Chibi Yasha. Puts a smile on my face! ^^



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed   
Date: May 20, 2012
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Utopia.

I don't know what sorcery you use to write your stories but this chapter was just magical. I love Inuyasha's gift so much, and while I'm ridunkulously upset they can't get married the way they want, his gift made me feel so much better. I just have soo many feelings! I'm all =D/D= right now! Anyway, awesome chapter, I lovee it!

Da Grrrl Says: Awww, what a nice review. Thank you!! I tried to make this chapter as \"sweet\" as I could since I knew a few bumps were coming in their road. I hope to finish the next chapter of this soon -wish me luck!



Reviewer: Rochoa   Signed  starstarstarstarstar  
Date: May 20, 2012
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Nefarious.

Oh.my.god. I was not expecting that at all. Craziness! In my head, I was like, does it mean Sesshoumaru is in...a desert? (Yeah, I'm kind of dull haha). Please update this again when you can! I die a little inside every moment I can't read what happens next! And this is probably my favorite chapter yet! So much happens and I'm so glad Inuyasha is actually talking back and letting him know that he's not some kid to be ordered around! Though now I'm so scared for Inuyasha and Kagome because Toga does not seem like someone that is okay with not being obeyed.