Penname: subtledreamer [Contact] Real Name: Jess Joined: June 14, 2012 Last Visited: January 05, 2014 Status: Member Bio:
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Summary: He grew up alone in a world that doesn't understand him and she just lost the only one she ever had. But when fate steps in, will Kagome find everything she needs in InuYasha's eyes?
Categories: Challenges
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60950 Read Count: 12815
[Report This] Published: June 23, 2007 Updated: June 16, 2013
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed 
Date: May 13, 2013
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Hope is Found With Time.
Date: May 13, 2013
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: Hope is Found With Time.
Ahh, I reread this chapter & i forgot how absolutely sad it is! You were able to convey uncertainty, pain, anguish in all the characters in the chapters. Wonderful job!
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed 
Date: June 16, 2013
Chapter number: 13
Title: Chapter 13: The Winds of Change
Date: June 16, 2013
Chapter number: 13
Title: Chapter 13: The Winds of Change
Ohh, and the plot thickens even more! Bah, have I ever told you how much I love how you portray Maikeru? He's such an adorable character xD!
DaGrrrl says: Thank you! I like Maikeru, too. I think he's a sweet old guy, and that's coming from someone who doesn't do the OC thing too much with fanfic (I mean, who reads IY fanfic for effin' OCs??), but I needed an older couple for this story and decided to make my own when I couldn't find anyone in IY that I thought would be a nice fit. (And I'm glad I did!)
Summary: [Complete.] Her Husband. His child. Can the perfect marriage survive the ultimate betrayal? Sometimes the greatest gifts are the ones you never wanted...
Categories: Love, IG
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome, Kikyou, Miroku, Original Character, Sango
Genres: Angst, AU, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, WAFF
Warnings: Explicit Sexual Content, Language
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56440 Read Count: 14678
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2007 Updated: February 22, 2010
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: July 22, 2012
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Uninvited
Date: July 22, 2012
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: Uninvited
I've read this story before on fanfiction, a few years back, but I'm rereading it again because I could remember I absolutely loved this!
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: July 22, 2012
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Shattered
Date: July 22, 2012
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Shattered
Man, the emotions the characters feel is so strong and palpable!
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: July 23, 2012
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: What It Feels Like.
Date: July 23, 2012
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: What It Feels Like.
Oh man, you sure know how to put emotions in your writing to make yer readers feel what we read. I don't just see it, I feel the emotions the characters feel, as if I'm actually there witnessing it first hand.
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: July 23, 2012
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10: The Roads That Lead Us Home
Date: July 23, 2012
Chapter number: 10
Title: Chapter 10: The Roads That Lead Us Home
beautifully written with a beautiful plot line.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks so much. I\'m happy you enjoyed it and was able to stick it out until the end. <3
Summary: "I'll wait for you in my dreams." "And I'll be there. I swear it."
Categories: Blood & Roses
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Angst, AU, Drama, Oneshot, Romance, Songfic
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6053 Read Count: 1493
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2007 Updated: October 14, 2007
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Je t'adore
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Je t'adore
Oh my god, this was heartbreakingly beautiful!
Summary: Birthday present for InuGrrrl. Inuyasha is struck by Naraku's most dangerous curse yet. Perhaps somehow, there's a way this can work for Kagome's advantage. Lemon, InuxKagx???
Categories: "Lovelie" Gifts
Characters: InuYasha, Kagome
Genres: Canon, Hentai, Oneshot
Warnings: Explicit Sexual Content, Language
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7012 Read Count: 1349
[Report This] Published: February 29, 2008 Updated: February 29, 2008
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: June 15, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Two Inu's Are Better Than One
Date: June 15, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Two Inu's Are Better Than One
That was hot. Loved it :D
Summary:
They were fated from the very start, but their worlds were too far apart for it to matter. Now he will try to fit a lifetime of love into one last winter.
Categories: Novellas, Love, IG
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38112 Read Count: 5486
[Report This] Published: April 25, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2013
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Date: June 15, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Destined.
Date: June 15, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Destined.
Awww, my god, my heart just burst with happiness! Lil Inuyasha is such an adorable character! The line that really got me hook line & sinker, was the very last line, oh dear, the cuteness of it all!
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: June 15, 2012
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Avow.
Date: June 15, 2012
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Avow.
Man, this chapter started pulling my heartstrings :}. Loved it! I also love the comfortable & trusting relationship between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha (if only I had such a sweet relationship with my sibling).
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: June 15, 2012
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Nefarious.
Date: June 15, 2012
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Nefarious.
Darn! You sure know how to bring emotion up in your writing. I feel for Kagome's and Inuyasha's suffering and their love. Not to mention, you sure as hell know how to leave one helluva cliff hanger! Great work as always!
Summary: This was not a night terror, not a succubus luring him into fail...
Categories: Darkfic, Challenges
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 750 Read Count: 986
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2008 Updated: September 02, 2008
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Date: June 28, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Kiss
Date: June 28, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Kiss
Wow, that was beautifully dark :}. You wrote his suffering and his torment in a short piece, but wonderfully written to capture all his pain that kept me reading through and through, no matter how disturbingly dark it was. I enjoyed reading it :}, you did wonderful as always in writing something out of the ordinary.
Summary: It's just three words, and I don't say them all that often, but...
Categories: Challenges
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 500 Read Count: 1275
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2008 Updated: September 16, 2008
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Reciprocity
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Reciprocity
Short, simple, but so damned sweet! :}
Summary: "I can't imagine the hell I'll catch if I get caught in here, but this is worth the risk."
Categories: Flash Pulp
Characters: InuYasha
Genres: AU, Ficlet, WAFF
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100 Read Count: 877
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: April 05, 2009
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Date: June 17, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Where's My Kiss?
Date: June 17, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Where's My Kiss?
AWWW, THAT WAS BLOODY ADORABLE!
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: June 17, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Where's My Kiss?
Date: June 17, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Where's My Kiss?
I forgot to add, simple and short, but it was so darned sweet!
Summary:
[Epilogue Posted] A lost memory resurfaces, triggering a journey of self-discovery. Can Kagome convince a broken heart that it was ever loved?
Categories: Novellas, Love, IG
Characters: InuYasha, Izayoi, Kagome, Toga/Touga
Genres: Angst, AU, Family, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Slice of Life, Tragedy, WAFF
Warnings: Character Death, Language
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50046 Read Count: 13671
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2009 Updated: April 22, 2011
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: My Own Way
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: My Own Way
Aww! I enjoyed reading this chapter :}. It was cute and heartwarming too. On to the next one!
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Want You More
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 4
Title: Chapter 4: Want You More
...enjoy the most fever-inducing shadow he'd ever seen.
For some reason, I found that line to be the most amusing to me :D.
i love how you keep putting up Disney references throughout the chapters, it reminds me that no matter how old we can be, we'll always have a childish part about us :}
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Shadows on Your Side
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Shadows on Your Side
Whoa, the tension between Inuyasha and Sango was written beautifully!
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Lonely in Your Nightmare
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: Lonely in Your Nightmare
Beautifully written that tears started to pop up as I read xD. You really can feel the emotion in this story :}
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue: The Flavor of Life
Date: August 22, 2012
Chapter number: 8
Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue: The Flavor of Life
Absolutely wonderful! Every pain, suffering, love, cute moments, everything, was entwined in this story! Thank you for taking the time to write this :}
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you for all of the great reviews. I appreciate it and I\'m glad you liked the story! ^^
Summary: [Complete] Three days would pass before he'd figure out why he got the room... and damn him for continuing to let her believe it.
Categories: Novellas, Love, IG
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43080 Read Count: 5582
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2010 Updated: June 16, 2012
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Date: May 14, 2013
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: First Position
Date: May 14, 2013
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: First Position
Wow, what an interesting twist on what Inuyasha does! Never read something like this before and it's bloody awesome!
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: May 14, 2013
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: CODA
Date: May 14, 2013
Chapter number: 6
Title: Chapter 6: CODA
Wonderful story!
Summary: [Complete] My drabble collection, "SWOON", written for my LJ Community, Challenge Destiny.
Categories: Challenges, Flash Pulp
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3644 Read Count: 12409
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2011 Updated: June 03, 2011
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: July 22, 2012
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Maybe We're Sealed In Silence
Date: July 22, 2012
Chapter number: 5
Title: Chapter 5: Maybe We're Sealed In Silence
Wow, even though yer chapters are short, they sure as hell pack a punch with emotion! Good job! Short, but strong :}.
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: July 22, 2012
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: We Can Laugh About It Now
Date: July 22, 2012
Chapter number: 12
Title: Chapter 12: We Can Laugh About It Now
"Leaning in, he captured her lips in not a kiss, but a promise."
Love that line! My favourite line in the whole story of yers!
Summary: "Let me make this clear so there's no misunderstanding." He lifted her chin with a single finger. "I get what I want, Kagome, and I'm not afraid to get my hands dirty."
Categories: Novellas, Love, IG
Characters: Ayame, Bankotsu, Guest Character, Hakudoushi, Hojo, InuYasha, Izayoi, Jakotsu, Kaede, Kagome, Kagura, Kanna, Kikyou, Kohaku, Kouga, Miroku, Mrs. Higurashi, Myouga/Myoga, Naraku, Original Character, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Shippou, Souta, Souten, Toga/Touga, Tsubaki
Genres: Angst, AU, Crossover, Drama, Friendship, Hentai, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, School Life, Shoujo, Slice of Life, Tragedy, WAFF, Yaoi
Warnings: Abuse, Aggressive Sex, Bisexuality, Explicit Sexual Content, Implied Rape, Language, Punishment, Underage Sexual Relationships, Violence
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23350 Read Count: 4950
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2011 Updated: June 16, 2014
Reviewer: subtledreamer Signed
Date: May 13, 2013
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
Date: May 13, 2013
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Millionaire Boys Club
Wow, already I'm hooked with yer footnote, immediately grabbed my attention. I love how you didn't just plop who the charcaters were in yer story, you were able to entwine them smoothly with yer plot and for that, I am so grateful! Nothing irks me more than misplaced descriptions that seems to be just thrown there xD