Penname: SHORTFRY [Contact] Real Name: Joined: September 24, 2012 Last Visited: June 11, 2013 Status: Member Bio:
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Summary: Kagome pushes InuYasha too far, and he decides that she needs to learn her place. Dark fiction.
Categories: Darkfic, Blood & Roses
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3419 Read Count: 2735
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2006 Updated: June 15, 2006
Reviewer: SHORTFRY Signed 
Date: September 24, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha
Date: September 24, 2012
Chapter number: 1
Title: Chapter 1: He Saw Red: Respect the Alpha
This was a lovely oneshot. I can't believe people flamed you saying this was rape -__-" It's not even remotely close, even to me I don't feel like it's dark enough. Anyways, beautifully written little lemon :)
Summary: InuYasha was happy, in love, and in what he thought was a great relationship... Then it all fell apart. Depressed and lonely, he meets someone new. It was all supposed to be fun and games...
Categories: Pulp-Fiction
Characters: Bankotsu, InuYasha, Kagome, Kagura, Kikyou, Kouga, Miroku, Naraku, Original Character, Rin, Sango, Sesshomaru, Suikotsu, Toga/Touga
Genres: Angst, AU, Dark, Drama, Hentai, Romance, Tragedy, WAFF
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Explicit Sexual Content, Graphic Violence, Language, Masturbation/Solo, Violence
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98410 Read Count: 33588
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2006 Updated: June 20, 2006
Reviewer: SHORTFRY Signed
Date: October 21, 2012
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: All I Want is Someone I Can't Resist
Date: October 21, 2012
Chapter number: 2
Title: Chapter 2: All I Want is Someone I Can't Resist
I love how descriptive this is, although Kagome was rather bold in this chapter :) Love it!
Reviewer: SHORTFRY Signed
Date: October 21, 2012
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Devil's in Your Kiss
Date: October 21, 2012
Chapter number: 3
Title: Chapter 3: Devil's in Your Kiss
Great chapter, but there's an unfinished sentence at the end of this chapter, I don't know if it got accidentally cut off or something.
Da Grrrl Says: Thanks for telling me! This is one of the completed stories I had to move twice and repost here (with the help of a friend) and sometimes there are mistakes. I don\'t reread my old works, so I miss them at times. All fixed now, though.
Reviewer: SHORTFRY Signed
Date: October 22, 2012
Chapter number: 28
Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: I was Cryin' When I Met You
Date: October 22, 2012
Chapter number: 28
Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: I was Cryin' When I Met You
This was a beautiful story! I couldn't put it down once I started reading it. You did a wonderful job on plotting the conspiracies, which was refreshing considering most other stories I've read involving framing/fraud/illegal activities were rushed and didn't hold details that would seem remotely plausible. But the way you've written it made it believable. Good job!
Da Grrrl Says: Thank you! I appreciate the awesome comment -and the fact that you genuinely enjoyed the story. :D