You'll probably notice that I will often lump my review of the entire story into one at the final chapter. That's because your work absorbs me so quickly and so thoroughly that I literally have problems stopping. Granted, I should probably take the time to occasionally review at the end of a chapter because I tend to forget things by the time I hit the final paragraph. So here is me trying to incorporate every feeling that I had while reading this story.

Never once have I pictured InuYasha as a danseur. Could be lack of creativity, a close-minded outlook of his personality, or just the fact that I haven't yet reached that level of thinking regarding this fandom - but whatever the reason is just know that now I cannot stop picturing him as a danseur. You described him so perfectly, all taut muscles with tights and flowing black hair. Too much yum for me to handle. It's no wonder at all that Kagome ended up falling for him, combined with his personality InuYasha was definitely a hot commodity. Now that I've explained how delicious I think you've made danseur InuYasha I will try to get onto what I thought of each chapter.

Well to put it simply, I thought they were all brilliant. But I believe you are already aware of how wonderful I think your writing talents are, but I'm going to do my best to let you know how much your work was on this story was appreciated.

With my limited experience of ballet - like one to three years when I was five - I was able to recognize at least some of the moves. Though I never reached pointe I still think the art form is beautiful, and it will always be something I wish I had stuck with. That is neither here or there. What I'm trying to say is my experience in ballet made me want to read this fic initially, and the way you described everything kept me reading.

The structure of the first chapter was magnificent. It was a reflection of sorts and it was a great way to start off this story. InuYasha was rightfully pissed off about the way Kikyou had treated him, and I am so glad that Kagome came into his life. I also loved the pink overalls she was sporting. I could picture it beautifully. Then the introduction of the misinterpretation had me so giddily intrigued. I eagerly went to the second chapter to start.

That chapter was the perfect complement to the first. It showed in flashbacks how InuYasha realized why he got the apartment, and how he also realized that maybe revealing the truth might result in him not having the apartment. It should have been easy, living somewhere for a year and then moving on without so much as a backward glance. The keyword is should, because if love and friendship hadn't come into play certainly InuYasha would have been able to carry out those plans. But oh did I adore the relationship that sprouted between these two. And boy did I adore their relationship. The nicknames, the post-it notes, the cuddles, the talks, the ILY, and the affection were almost too much for me to handle. Those two were in a relationship before they even knew they were in a relationship. It was amazing, and heartbreaking all at the same time.

Half the time I wasn't sure who I felt more pain over: InuYasha for being forced into the role of "gay" friend and being in too deep to see an easy way out, or Kagome for falling so hard for someone she thought to be so unobtainable. It all just made my heart clench, and I just kept hoping for the best.

Bankotsu's entrance was absolutely the best thing. InuYasha thought he was a potential suitor to Kagome, and was pissed about it. Then when he realized that wasn't the case he simply thought he was going to be getting another male friend. He didn't once think that Kagome was setting him up, and when he did realize I loved the almost playful anger that he had at Kagome over it. He could have yelled something harsh at her, but he kept it light all the while making his displeasure known. I loved that.

The first time the had sex crippled me. I knew it was coming, I did, but I did not expect it in that form. God, I'm still fanning myself. How Kagome could think that man was gay after how thoroughly he fucked her is beyond me. I can't even form words around my thoughts on that scene. It was so artfully described, so downright passionate, that I think MY blood was on fire and I was only reading about it. I can only imagine how those two felt.

Then Kikyou's reappearance was also something that I enjoyed. It's weird, because normally anything disrupting the byplay that is InuYasha and Kagome makes me seethe at least a bit but this worked perfectly. Probably because Kagome kept a level head, and probably because Kikyou was able to accept defeat so easily. Seeing her admit to her mistakes was also good.

Miroku and Sango were also a great addition to this plot. The whole pregnancy angle showed the passing of time really well. So that was wonderful too.

I can't sing enough praises about your work. So I just hope that you know you have some beautiful creations under your belt, and it is wonderful to be able to share them with you.

I loved every part of this story, and, like all your work, I am sure I will be revisiting it again and again!

Unfortunately I don't know that I will be able to read anything more today. It is noon right now, and I promised my nephew I'd go to his game and I have too much homework to accomplish to spare a moment reading. Maybe I'll be able to squeeze in a story or a chapter on my breaks.

Author's Response: WOW!!! I love this!! What a huge and thoughtful review. Thank yous o much!! This story was written for a friend that passed away from cancer a few years ago. It was a request and she wasn't here long enough to see the end. I feel guilty about that because it was due to my having writer's block for so long. But I was determined to keep my promise and I'm glad I did. Nailing the last chapter was a great thing, and wherever she is, I hope she was happy with it.

As for the content itself, omg, Danseur InuYasha was great to write. I've never thought of him as a danseur myself, but I knew I wanted to make him one -a believable one- and I think it went off well. And Bankotsu was a joy. I loved his character and the way he was hitting on such an oblivious InuYasha. Ha!

As for the smut, I'll be honest. I hate writing it and have no idea why people enjoy it so much. lol. I love to READ smut, but writing it sucks. It's have to be creative when you're dealing with the same old 'acts' every time, but as long as you guys still like it, I'll keep writing it (Though, I'm rusty as hell now).

Thanks again for such a wonderful review. Made my whole day! <33

This was just precious. InuYasha is the sweetest, and it was very cute how he fell asleep in his attempts to make a star. He wouldn't give up on a task unless it was complete, so that felt very true to character! This whole thing could fit perfectly into the canon-verse. As always I loved this! And thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks!! I never do holiday fics or oneshots anymore, so this was a challenge. lol. But it was for a Secret Santa, so I made an exception. Very glad you liked it! :D